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Sep 16, 2005



I'm curious as to your interpretation of this poem? What gives you cause to think that this isn't the medium for a poem such as this? What about the transparency shakes you up? Where in the definition of poetry does it state that poetry is not real conversation? I'd love to hear your comments.


this is really transparent...lovingly, this may not be the proper medium for delivery of such a poem.

but I'm anonymous and third party...but it awkward to read for me...perhaps real conversation is more appropriate.

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