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May 24, 2005



it was really cool
i loved it, all of it

timothy putnam

Wonderful imagery! I specifically liked, "can't see the water for what's drowning. Can't hold on with these broken arms and dreams."

Sat down with my guitar and sang through it...

It's a very moving poem.

jd walt

bought with sunrise, water, birth and blood. Bleed the death from me, yield ten million gallons.
Pale and weak I’ll crumble into arms fit to carry me home.

very nice Kasey-- visceral.

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